Lin Dynasty ... Chapter 15
Thanks to De Book Worm, I have been given Chapter 15 (rules here).
The earlier chapters:-
Chapter 1 – Lin Peh
Chapter 2 – PJ
Chapter 3 – Lilian
Chapter 4 – Cocka Doodle
Chapter 5 – Ah Pek
Chapter 6 – Helen
Chapter 7 – Zara’s Mama
Chapter 8 – King’s Wife
Chapter 9 – Seng Kor
Chapter 10 – LB
Chapter 11 – May
Chapter 12 - Fantasyflier
Chapter 13 - Jomel
Chapter 14 - Bkworm
Inside his humid and rather untidy study-room, Father Fanshee Yau wiped the sweat off his forehead as he looked at the strange group of people gathered before him: Flyboy who had earlier told Ahjomel matter-of-factly that he was her father, Ahjomel who had just been informed that she was going to be an heiress to a multi-million dollar estate, Inspector Boh Tong Kee who had brought the two of them together, and King’s Wife who had just helicoptered in with a pack of important looking documents.
“Alright,” said Father Fan softly, “are we all ready?”
“I think we are,” said Inspector Boh impatiently, “let’s bring all this to an end once and for all, Father. We have waited years for this moment.”
Father Fan let off a sigh, then whispered to his aide, an ugly looking hump-backed brute built like a bus, “Would you be so kind as to bring her in now?”
With a grunt, Humpy lumbered out and within minutes returned with a woman who looked like she had spent half her life inside a dungeon. She was too weak to stand and dropped on the floor like a ragged doll. The rest of the people gasped in shock. Ahjomel turned her face away instinctively, unable to continue looking at that wretched woman motionless on the floor.
“Oh my God,” exclaimed King’s Wife, “don’t tell me this is …?”
“You mean,” stuttered Flyboy, “you mean this is Ahmay, my other daughter? Oh no …!”
When the group had regained their composure, Father Fan put on a very old pair of reading glasses and turned his attention to the documents that King’s Wife had given him.
“According to this document,” he began, “Miss Ahjomel inherits a multi-million dollar estate provided she identifies Miss Ahmay as her sister, takes her home, and employs her as a maid. It’s as simple as that. Is that clear to you, Ms Ahjomel?”
“Crystal,” answered Ahjomel quietly, still covering her mouth with her silk hankerchief, trying not to be sick.
“Are you willing to take your sister home and employ her as a maid?”
“Of course,” replied Ahjomel, clearing her throat. Then slowly, she moved towards the wretched woman still on the floor, “Oh my poor Ahmay, what have they done to you? Everything is going to be alright, I promise. I’m taking you home now. Come.”
King’s Wife wiped a tear, Flyboy managed a weak smile, and Inspector Boh breathed a sigh of relief.
“Just a moment please,” said Father Fan, softly as ever. Turning to the woman on the floor, he said, “Now my child, would you kindly tell us who you are?”
“Ah … ah …” It was clear that she was trying to muster whatever strength she had left.
“Yes, my child,” coaxed the man of the cloth, bending down to her, “what is your name?”
“My name is … Ah …”
“Yes?”
“My name is Ahjomel. I am the real Ahjomel!”
It is my pleasure to pass the baton to our recent birthday boy, Mr Simple American! Belated Happy birthday, pal!
The earlier chapters:-
Chapter 1 – Lin Peh
Chapter 2 – PJ
Chapter 3 – Lilian
Chapter 4 – Cocka Doodle
Chapter 5 – Ah Pek
Chapter 6 – Helen
Chapter 7 – Zara’s Mama
Chapter 8 – King’s Wife
Chapter 9 – Seng Kor
Chapter 10 – LB
Chapter 11 – May
Chapter 12 - Fantasyflier
Chapter 13 - Jomel
Chapter 14 - Bkworm
Inside his humid and rather untidy study-room, Father Fanshee Yau wiped the sweat off his forehead as he looked at the strange group of people gathered before him: Flyboy who had earlier told Ahjomel matter-of-factly that he was her father, Ahjomel who had just been informed that she was going to be an heiress to a multi-million dollar estate, Inspector Boh Tong Kee who had brought the two of them together, and King’s Wife who had just helicoptered in with a pack of important looking documents.
“Alright,” said Father Fan softly, “are we all ready?”
“I think we are,” said Inspector Boh impatiently, “let’s bring all this to an end once and for all, Father. We have waited years for this moment.”
Father Fan let off a sigh, then whispered to his aide, an ugly looking hump-backed brute built like a bus, “Would you be so kind as to bring her in now?”
With a grunt, Humpy lumbered out and within minutes returned with a woman who looked like she had spent half her life inside a dungeon. She was too weak to stand and dropped on the floor like a ragged doll. The rest of the people gasped in shock. Ahjomel turned her face away instinctively, unable to continue looking at that wretched woman motionless on the floor.
“Oh my God,” exclaimed King’s Wife, “don’t tell me this is …?”
“You mean,” stuttered Flyboy, “you mean this is Ahmay, my other daughter? Oh no …!”
When the group had regained their composure, Father Fan put on a very old pair of reading glasses and turned his attention to the documents that King’s Wife had given him.
“According to this document,” he began, “Miss Ahjomel inherits a multi-million dollar estate provided she identifies Miss Ahmay as her sister, takes her home, and employs her as a maid. It’s as simple as that. Is that clear to you, Ms Ahjomel?”
“Crystal,” answered Ahjomel quietly, still covering her mouth with her silk hankerchief, trying not to be sick.
“Are you willing to take your sister home and employ her as a maid?”
“Of course,” replied Ahjomel, clearing her throat. Then slowly, she moved towards the wretched woman still on the floor, “Oh my poor Ahmay, what have they done to you? Everything is going to be alright, I promise. I’m taking you home now. Come.”
King’s Wife wiped a tear, Flyboy managed a weak smile, and Inspector Boh breathed a sigh of relief.
“Just a moment please,” said Father Fan, softly as ever. Turning to the woman on the floor, he said, “Now my child, would you kindly tell us who you are?”
“Ah … ah …” It was clear that she was trying to muster whatever strength she had left.
“Yes, my child,” coaxed the man of the cloth, bending down to her, “what is your name?”
“My name is … Ah …”
“Yes?”
“My name is Ahjomel. I am the real Ahjomel!”
It is my pleasure to pass the baton to our recent birthday boy, Mr Simple American! Belated Happy birthday, pal!

14 Comments:
At 4:05 AM,
Simple American said…
Thanks. I'm on it.
Could I have 96 hours. Got some slang I got to better understand. Colloqialisms and such.
At 8:30 AM,
Bkworm said…
OMG! OMG! Two Ahjomels! This is getting really twisted! Good one, Fishtail.
At 8:48 AM,
may said…
wooooooo! swapped identities! fishtail, you certainly are a great storry teller! wish I thought of that one... oooh, what's next, what's next? can't wait! hurry up, SA!
At 10:21 AM,
Zara's Mama said…
So Ahjomel is Ahmay, Ahmay is Ahjomel?
What a plot!
At 6:04 PM,
JoMel said…
OMG!!!!! HAHAHAHA! This is so hilarious! I feel like I am watching Pink Panther again! HAHAHA!
At 6:46 PM,
5xmom ~chanlilian.net~ said…
Argghh.....I am lost 'cos I was stucked at fantasyflier. Must go catch up on bkworm and jomel first. I remember somewhere I was mom to two girls? Die lar, I get nightmare just trying to figure out the story.
(will only read yrs after I follow up from chapter 12)
At 8:50 PM,
L B said…
Hahah!! Wonderful!!! *rubs hands with glee*
At 9:19 PM,
fishtail said…
#simple american, lots of people are eagerly waiting to read your chapter (see May's comment). Take your time, we'll wait.
#de book worm, two Ahjomels but surely only one is the original one and the other the celup one!
#may, somebody is going to be a millionairess and somebody is going to be a maid, so ...
#zara's mum, Ahmay claims to be Ahjomel but we'll have to see what Ahjomel has to say.
#Jomel, Simple American is coming out with something fantastic, I'm sure.
#5xmom, somebody swapped 2 babies with Lilian while she wasn't looking!
#lb, we all have to wait for 96 hours :)
At 7:09 AM,
Twisted Heels said…
So fast Chapter 15? Gosh, I read 4 chapters only.
Need to catch up fast. Interesting chain story indeed!
At 1:54 PM,
Fantasy "Sticky" Flier said…
OMG I can't believe what I started on a lark, all that twists, *giddy need to sit down on Helen's lap*
LOL well done fishtail! extremely interesting and we want more more!
Err you think we got chance at next year's oscar or not?
At 8:00 PM,
Cocka Doodle said…
Wow!! More mystery unfurled! Good job, fishtail.
Twisted Heels...can't tear yourself away from chapter 4 right? LOL
At 11:11 PM,
fishtail said…
#twisted heels, you'll notice there's a change from XXX rated to PG rated and then to U rated as we move from the first few chapters to Chapters 13, 14, 15 and 16.
#fantasyflier, to qualify for next year's oscar, we'll probably have to bring in Ang Lee, Gong Li, and Jet Li all in one!
#cocka doodle, but Simple American is about to shave off some of the mystery now ...
At 12:41 AM,
exiledbrother said…
Woo-hoo!
GO SIMPLE AMERICAN!
At 3:29 AM,
JamesT said…
nice... i love stories haha.. the plot is interesting.. XD
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